Delinquent

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Romance


This is my first original story in a while so a little constructive criticism would be nice!

Chapter 1 (v.1) - Chapter 1

Submitted: January 09, 2020

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“Sophia, you're going to be late for school!” my mother said as I roused from my sleep. It’s been like this ever since my dad died six years ago in a car crash. I get up late and start getting ready to head to school, she yells at me for it, I go to school, and then I don’t come home till eleven pm. Me and her are very different in both looks and personality. I have black hair with olive skin and brown eyes while she has blonde hair with pale skin and blue eyes. I'm louder and more sarcastic while she's quieter and very bland if I'm going to be honest. Overall me and her don’t get along at all compared to my little brother Marcus who’s just like me minus the sarcasm.

“Sophia Albion Mendoza, you are GOING to be late if you don’t get your butt out that door right now!” I heard my mother yell again, this time sounded very angry. Not out of the ordinary for her when it comes to me. She’s hated me ever since my dad died when I was eleven, claiming that it was my fault he was dead despite that not being the case. That was far from the truth, as I had not been with my dad when he left to go to the store that snowy night to get more alcohol for my alcoholic of a mother.

“Alright, you dumb witch, I’m going. Geez, do you have to yell at me every time I go to do something?” I said angrily. But before she could say anything else, I was out the door. I'm called by pretty much everyone in my school a delinquent. They only call me that because I skip school and get into fights on the rare occasion that I do go to school which often results in me getting suspended a lot.

I honestly have forgotten the reason why I do all these things that get me suspended from school. Was it because i wanted to makebmy mother mad? Was it due to the grief i still felt over my dad's death? so many questions went through my head everyday about that.

I didnt notice the boy walking in front of me stop at an intersection due to me being lost in my thoughts, and i bumped into him. I saw him turn around and say, "hey, watch where you're-" before realizing who I was just as I noticed who he was.

"Sophia?"

"Brice?"


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