The Intruder

The Intruder

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Mystery and Crime  |  House: Booksie Classic
I actually wrote this poem after killing a spider in my room and it so happens to be one of my major fears and so I wrote this poem to hopefully fill the void

Submitted: January 13, 2020

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The intruder

As I walk inside my room
Minding my business as usual
Facing down
Looking on my phone
With my headphones on
I see something unusual

My gut instantly triggered 
Boy look at the top corner in the room
My heart beat stopped for a second
My nose became moist
I'm frightened...

I spot these long hairy legs
Hanging on fluff like ropes
Facing the corner of my ceiling...

And suddenly it hit me

There was a spider in my room

Shuu!


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Mystery and Crime fantasy poetry mystery poem fears

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