I Want To Give In

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Non-Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic

Haiku

 

I want to give in.

 

I want to give up the fight.

 

Darkness, just take me.


Submitted: February 12, 2020

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Mike S.

Don't; having said that, another fine haiku, Janeen

Wed, February 12th, 2020 11:17pm

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It's been tough, Mike. As always, Thank you for reading and commenting.

Wed, February 12th, 2020 3:24pm

Prince EL

There is hope as long as you're alive. Hang on to hope's hand., Janeen.

Thu, February 13th, 2020 12:18am

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Much appreciated, Prince EL

Wed, February 12th, 2020 4:25pm

Jeff Bezaire

Good times are coming if you hold on.
Give yourself one more day, and one more day, and one more, and one more. Take it one day at a time and keep giving yourself tomorrow. The time will pass and your frown will become a smile again.

Thu, February 13th, 2020 2:27am

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Thank you so much, Jeff, for your kind words. Here's hoping.

Wed, February 12th, 2020 6:36pm

hullabaloo22

I understand, jmm. Have been feeling the same, but what do we do? We carry on!

Thu, February 13th, 2020 8:06pm

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I thank you, Hully. Be well.

Thu, February 13th, 2020 3:12pm

Sue Harris

So sorry to read this, jmm. Hang on in there, dear girl... sending love and hugs x

Thu, February 13th, 2020 10:31pm

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Very nice of you, Sue. I really appreciate it.

Thu, February 13th, 2020 3:10pm

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