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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A poem that connects your inner self with who you are.

Fly away with the wind and feel

How your heart’s truly a big deal

There’s nothing to conceal

Perfection irradiates from your appeal.

 

Lightweight as a feather

Feeling yourself come together

You are happy, you are perfect

A unique special effect.

 

Inspiration fills your soul

Love gives you control

Life gives you a role

Happiness makes you whole.

 

You get stronger every day

No matter what you go through anyway

You feel as if living a fairytale

Thus, believing every detail.

 

Achieving tasks with passion

Labeling dreams with captions

Taking thoughts into action

Expressions so full of reactions.

 

Grasping your confidence from within

How should you try to begin?

Goosebumps throughout your skin

Erasing who you’d thought you’d been.

 

Unique, so full of power

Blooming with grace like a flower

You open your eyes

And see a new day’s sunrise.

 

Spreading out your wings

A new morning dove sings

Your soul wakes from within

There’s always hope from therein.

 

Living without borders

Refusing to take orders

Imagining worlds without borders

YOU are your inner explorer.


Submitted: March 08, 2020

© Copyright 2021 AnaGVF. All rights reserved.

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TheNerdCorner

Excellent poem! I thoroughly enjoyed it :-)

Mon, March 9th, 2020 11:54pm

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Thank you!! I'm really happy that you enjoyed it!! n.n

Wed, March 11th, 2020 11:51am

S.R.Carss

I really enjoyed your poem! Very deep and heartfelt. Excellent :-)

Tue, March 10th, 2020 3:08am

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Thank you for the nice comments!! I'm really happy that you enjoyed it!! n.n

Wed, March 11th, 2020 11:52am

Kitty Kinncaid

I like that you have a great sense of rhyme. It's not easy to do when adding the exact content desired. I would suggest the challenge of formatted poetry, like writing a Shakespearean Sonnet, for example. It's quite a challenge with all of its rules, but just as satisfying when pulling if off. All the best! Kitty

Sat, March 14th, 2020 2:47pm

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Thank you so much!! I will try your challenge! Thank you for reading!! n.n

Sat, March 14th, 2020 11:09am

CJ Spuddz

This was such a positive, calming, motivating and talented poem to read. I look forward to reading more of your work!!

Sun, April 19th, 2020 10:09am

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Thank you so much for the nice comments!! :D I'm really happy that you enjoyed it!! n.n

Sun, April 19th, 2020 1:51pm

Ron Writes

This is the kind of writing that can change lives.

Fri, July 10th, 2020 2:36pm

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Thank you so much for the nice feedback! :)

Fri, July 10th, 2020 9:12am

simon arthur

That was great poetry. I really liked the rhyming and the rhythm. It had great rhythm. And good imagery. It was inspirational and positive. I love it.

Mon, September 7th, 2020 8:48am

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Thank you so much for the nice feedback! I'm happy that you enjoyed it! :D

Sun, September 13th, 2020 6:35pm

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