Fly away with the wind and feel
How your heart’s truly a big deal
There’s nothing to conceal
Perfection irradiates from your appeal.
Lightweight as a feather
Feeling yourself come together
You are happy, you are perfect
A unique special effect.
Inspiration fills your soul
Love gives you control
Life gives you a role
Happiness makes you whole.
You get stronger every day
No matter what you go through anyway
You feel as if living a fairytale
Thus, believing every detail.
Achieving tasks with passion
Labeling dreams with captions
Taking thoughts into action
Expressions so full of reactions.
Grasping your confidence from within
How should you try to begin?
Goosebumps throughout your skin
Erasing who you’d thought you’d been.
Unique, so full of power
Blooming with grace like a flower
You open your eyes
And see a new day’s sunrise.
Spreading out your wings
A new morning dove sings
Your soul wakes from within
There’s always hope from therein.
Living without borders
Refusing to take orders
Imagining worlds without borders
YOU are your inner explorer.
Submitted: March 08, 2020
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I really enjoyed your poem! Very deep and heartfelt. Excellent :-)
Tue, March 10th, 2020 3:08am
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Thank you for the nice comments!! I'm really happy that you enjoyed it!! n.n
Wed, March 11th, 2020 11:52am
I like that you have a great sense of rhyme. It's not easy to do when adding the exact content desired. I would suggest the challenge of formatted poetry, like writing a Shakespearean Sonnet, for example. It's quite a challenge with all of its rules, but just as satisfying when pulling if off. All the best! Kitty
Sat, March 14th, 2020 2:47pm
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Thank you so much!! I will try your challenge! Thank you for reading!! n.n
Sat, March 14th, 2020 11:09am
This was such a positive, calming, motivating and talented poem to read. I look forward to reading more of your work!!
Sun, April 19th, 2020 10:09am
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Thank you so much for the nice comments!! :D I'm really happy that you enjoyed it!! n.n
Sun, April 19th, 2020 1:51pm
This is the kind of writing that can change lives.
Fri, July 10th, 2020 2:36pm
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Thank you so much for the nice feedback! :)
Fri, July 10th, 2020 9:12am
That was great poetry. I really liked the rhyming and the rhythm. It had great rhythm. And good imagery. It was inspirational and positive. I love it.
Mon, September 7th, 2020 8:48am
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Thank you so much for the nice feedback! I'm happy that you enjoyed it! :D
Sun, September 13th, 2020 6:35pm
You really made me feel something by reading this. The most important thing about writing literature is connecting with the reader, which is what you accomplish with this poem. Rhyming is a choice now and days with poem, but you make it sound so natural and beautiful here. Keep up the great work, and I think I'll be a new fan of yours - E.E
Fri, March 5th, 2021 1:02am
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Thank you very much for the nice feedback! I'm very happy that you could feel something when reading this poem! Also, thank you very much for becoming a fan! :D
Thu, March 4th, 2021 6:03pm
It's a good lyric and It's full of wisdoms...:)
Sun, May 22nd, 2022 8:55am
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Thank you very much for your feedback! I am really happy that you liked it! :D
Sun, May 22nd, 2022 9:16amFacebook Comments
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Excellent poem! I thoroughly enjoyed it :-)
Mon, March 9th, 2020 11:54pmAuthor
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Thank you!! I'm really happy that you enjoyed it!! n.n
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