Star Girl | Chapter 1

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Science Fiction  |  House: zworld

Chapter 1 (v.1) - The Young Lady

Submitted: March 25, 2020

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it is a rainy day for a 9-year-old girl to have a sweet birthday, rosita -our young lady- woke up early with a smile on her face she thought of her future, the upcoming days hoping to have the odds in her favor, rosita wanted a perfect day, with her friends, family and everyone she cares about, literally everyone she had ever met.

The few hours rosita couldn't wait for them to pass weren't her worst worries, rosita feared the inevitable bad luck she believed she always had, she was afraid to have a power cut on her birthday, even if it was a usual event to have in summer in that time, her greatest fears unfortunately happened, what made things worse is that her family didn't finish her birthday song yet, a few letters were remaining for the birthday song she always liked to hear. what the young girl had always believed in couldn't be more true, "The only thing that makes me special is my bad luck" the young lady-crying-said these words. Rosita went to her room, the young rosita chose to spend the night in her room alone with her fears of darkness rather than staying safely with her guests. she was afraid to hear anything about being unlucky to have a power cut on her birthday.

Alone in her room, rosita started to convince herself that crying won't help much and that crying will do nothing but making her more afraid of darkness, she started to think of all the things that could make her special, regardless of her bad luck, hoping to find something special, she found nothing, all she remembered was random moments about having some good and consistent words - that could barely form a good sentence - in her head to write, and yet she never wrote. She suddenly started to think of writing a story, no matter how silly will it be, she couldn't think of something better to do in this darkness, especially as she noticed a little worn candle that would last for a few minutes.

it is a quite silent moment, rosita is thinking of her story, writing everything on her mind into her paper, rosita kept writing as she felt quite free of her fears as now she has nothing more important to worry about but finishing her story. 

while the young lady thought of some unique and consistent details that could add much to her story, rosita heard a stranger shouting "DON'T!! PLEASE DON'T!! NOTHING WOULD HELP, EVERYTHING STARTED FROM THIS MOMENT, NOTHING MATTERS, YOU ARE NOT SPECIAL IT WAS ALL A LIE, THEY USED TO LIE ON YOU" it was a voice of an odd woman, a familiar voice to her, she thought the old lady needed help so she went outside her house and surprisingly she found no one as if the old lady suddenly dissappeared. Rosita looked around her house and she found a young man walking towards his car, she asked him if he heard that voice of the women she thought needed help. The young man with a smile on his face staring in her eyes - as if he knew her for a long time years and as if he didn't see her for a longer time - said: "My young lady, I didn't hear anyone and I am sure that no one was here, it is your kind heart that made you think someone needs help, it must be the wind". "I think you are right, thank you, sir," rosita said, and while going back to her house, the young man said, " You are great, you have always been great, even in the darkest moments, always believe in yourself rosita, never stop thinking of making this world a better place for all of us, you have a perfect world in your mind, never be afraid of getting this world into our reality, go finish your story kid, I always believed in you rosita.. regardless of the consequences I believed in you.." 

 

 

 


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