At Red Sands

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

short poem

Lapwings flying up unexpectedly

In a random dance


Cavorting on the breeze

Like unruly kites


Then taking off in different

Directions across the moor


Leaving me to wonder

About you saying perhaps


Our relationship should go

In different directions too.

Submitted: April 23, 2020

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I like that your poem really captured that feeling of moving in directions and then at the very end shared why that's the case. It really built it up nicely and it was great to read.

Tue, May 26th, 2020 12:25am



R M Brogan.

Mon, May 25th, 2020 11:39pm

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