Can You See Me?

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Young Adult  |  House: Booksie Classic


Can you see me?

My searching gaze,

The smallness of my upper lip?

The darkness of my hair, and eyes in my dark room?

Can you see me?

My perfectly round smile?

I bet you can see me.

Though what I am, I try not to see,

You can see me,

Cant you?


Submitted: April 28, 2020

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hullabaloo22

Excellent. On the surface it seems pretty simple, but after a couple of reads it becomes quite compelling. Not an easy thing to achieve.

Tue, April 28th, 2020 7:28pm

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