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I have some advice. I would try to shorten some of your sentences. If you look at your first paragraph you have two long sentences. Just try to shorten them. You can look at my book and see how I shortened my sentences.
Wed, May 20th, 2020 8:30pmAuthor
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Yes and I appreciate the advice.
Thu, May 21st, 2020 4:43am