Could this be it?

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Mystery and Crime  |  House: Booksie Classic

Could this be the way am going to end my life?

Could this be it?


I am irresponsible 


Nonchalantly irresponsible

Unreasonable bored 

Not willing to be responsible

Always unhappy to myself 


Unable to please my soul

Imagine a heart in prison 

Helplessness dying 

Speedily running out of earth 


Yes it clear that I can do it

My soul is so narrow to escape

I have been eaten up by inferiority complex 

Environment as lay and hatch in me

Obviously unchangeable, why?


These are all fallacy 

A building on air 

A false experience appearing real 

An invisible steps u need to take

Come out of other's opinions 


Do a thorough cleaning

Do a thinking composed by you

Format other's opinions now

Stop moving back for castle on air

Your fear will never happen.


Submitted: May 30, 2020

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Criss Sole

Great poem!
I loved the line "I have been eaten up by inferiority complex."

Wed, September 2nd, 2020 8:09am

Ayoola Azeez

Thanks i really appreciate .

Thu, September 3rd, 2020 10:11am

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