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the tickets
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Let’s help you tighten this up a little more & get you some more readers, Ok?
Fri, June 5th, 2020 8:10am
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ok
Fri, June 5th, 2020 2:43am
I like where you are going with this!
Fri, June 5th, 2020 8:10am
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thanks
Fri, June 5th, 2020 2:42am
Good start. You could add a lot of "scene dressing" here. What did the girls look like? Did they live far apart? Describe Cindy's room where they meet. Great opportunity here to fill out the chapter.
Bill
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i didn't think of that
Mon, June 8th, 2020 10:23amFacebook Comments
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I remember when i was in school girls were going crazy for NSYNC and the Backstreet Boys. I can imagine how exciting it must be to have tickets.
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thanks yeah
Wed, June 3rd, 2020 10:19pm