Good Morning — Sydney Harbor

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A morning at the Harbor

Good Morning 
Sydney Harbor

Blanketing mist 
clouded the Harbor 
smuggled sunlight 
into the night. 
No one saw the sight 
of the crime 
but its trace 
of dew drops 
left on the 
morning roses petals. 


Submitted: June 11, 2020

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tom mcmullen

I liked this one Derina, were you inspired by the fog today?

Thu, June 11th, 2020 6:04am

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Yes! I woke early and watched it for a while and then went for the breakfast then the mist was gone. I missed the sunrise too. >_< But I saw the dews! I hope we can get another one tomorrow too.

Thu, June 11th, 2020 1:15am

johngumbs

There's something in this poem that tells me that you'r becoming better and better. It is nice how you made this up.

Thu, June 11th, 2020 8:43am

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Oh! Great! Thank you for this comment. I guess I have differnt writing styles and expressions and I want to try them all. I like this one too. Life itself is really inspiring. I have fun in making them alive too.

Thu, June 11th, 2020 2:15am

hullabaloo22

Beautifully descriptive, Derina! And perfectly written too.

Thu, June 11th, 2020 7:03pm

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Thank you! I enjoyed in writing it too. The idea came out in few secs, and wrote it in one go with little editing this time!

Thu, June 11th, 2020 7:11pm

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