Deep feelings

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

While writing this poem I was transported to an unknown world, I liked the feeling, it'smy first official poem! hope you like it.

I can't help but stop and look at the peculiar love.

Does love make you shiver?

Does it?

The most tender feeling, Above all, there is affection. Does affection make you tremble?

Does it?

One afternoon I said to myself, "Why aren't the kisses more intense?"

"Clash," they said, the kisses, And "crash" and then "crash" again.

When I think of passion, I see a divine harmony.

Never forget the vast, massive elegance. The true love that is so loved, Above all, it's the satisfaction.

Down, down, down into the darkness of sensuality, Gently comes the high price, the purity, the genuine, the good. 

Submitted: June 11, 2020

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Sharief Hendricks

Beautiful Liz !!

Im not big on poetry but , you might just have changed that …

South Africa

Thu, June 11th, 2020 9:02am

Prince EL

Great poem! The last two lines

Thu, June 11th, 2020 3:37pm

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