Cold Feet

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Humor  |  House: Booksie Classic

Warm body
Cold feet...

Cold Feet

 

Time to go to sleep

Soon we will be counting sheep

Electric blanket is warm and nice

Her body is hot but her feet are ice

She doesn't want to wear socks

She uses me to warm her ice blocks

I love being with her under the bedsheet 

But I fear my baby's cold feet

 

 


Submitted: June 14, 2020

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hullabaloo22

'Cold feet, warm heart'; that's what my Mom always told me. Nice poem, Sharief.

Mon, June 15th, 2020 7:11pm

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Thanx Hullabaloo 22

Appreciate the feedback !!!

Tue, June 16th, 2020 6:03am

Criss Sole

Hehehe, this was so cute.
I loved your rhyming.
Great poem.

Thu, June 25th, 2020 6:30am

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awww...thanx so much Criss

true story of my daily life...hahahaha

but I wouldn't change for the world !

Thu, June 25th, 2020 12:23am

D. Thurmond aka JEF

A fun poem that rings so true among many around the world. --- And why is the small of a man's back the best place to put them?

Sat, August 22nd, 2020 12:08am

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aha ! thanx so much for the cool comment Jeff...

Sun, August 23rd, 2020 12:37pm

Penetentman

This reminded me to turn on my electric blanket which I was sitting on lol. And I hate cold feet! Always have socks on!

Fri, December 4th, 2020 6:10am

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hahahaha, yeah, this is unfortunately but lovingly a true story, my wife has ice blocks for feet...hahahahahaha

Thanx so much Penetentman

Thu, December 3rd, 2020 11:30pm

Rehmat Tanzila

Damnnn I'm wearing double pair of socks; the poem has given me chills! Haha!

Sun, December 20th, 2020 5:08pm

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hahaha, good one Rehmat !

Thanx so much for the feedback !

Mon, January 18th, 2021 4:45am

Roxanne Byrne

Oh my gosh I really love this! I love how you took this sweet and intimate situation and heightened the fear of cold feet to to a hilarious degree. Great job!

Thu, January 21st, 2021 3:54pm

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Happy New Year Roxanne !!

I just returned from holiday and I'm am so pleased to be greeted by such an awesome comment.

This was such a fun little poem for me to write and it is absolutely true...hahahaha

Thanx sooooo much Roxanne !!!

Fri, January 22nd, 2021 5:17am

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