Lovely planet

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Lovely planet

The prodigious planet preparers the population meanwhile it protects publicly and powerfully, personifying pleasantly its parallelism.

The planet cried and felt tired after so much effort.

I remember clearly that beautiful summer afternoon when the powerful planet expressed its concern to me.

I feel like an empty glass, filling me up with each of its words.

I wept so loud that my cries were heard on all continents.

It was devastated the planet was a broken glass.

I can still hear the sound effect crash! crash! that it generated as it shattered into a thousand pieces.

The planet made me feel like I had eaten the forbidden fruit in the garden of Eden.

Hearing its last words, I feel at peace.

That day the atmosphere smelled of roses, jasmine and orchids.

I saw the full moon and I finally understood the warnings from the planet.


Submitted: June 14, 2020

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Archia

We must take care of our planet, it is a very precious and powerful thing. I really enjoyed your poem, it had a lot of impact.

Mon, June 15th, 2020 12:13am

bloodman

Good read, thought provoking.

Tue, June 16th, 2020 2:31pm

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