Talking Eyes

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

A poem about the first night I met my sweet husband..

I met a man with talking eyes

the color of wet sand


They confidently rolled the ask

He gently took my hand


We hit the floor to "Caribbean Queen"

They smiled and danced the beat


They closed to "Whiter Shade Of Pale"

His hands were gently sweet


The music stopped; the lights came on;

he kissed me on the cheek.


I met a man and fell in love

We didn't even speak.

Submitted: August 17, 2020

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L. M. Newbury

“The color of wet sand”
Love this description. The poem has a great rhythm.

Mon, August 17th, 2020 4:41pm


Thank you so much!

Mon, August 17th, 2020 2:38pm

Criss Sole

Love needs to words. Beautiful rhyming.

Sun, August 23rd, 2020 6:08am


Thank you Criss!

Sun, August 23rd, 2020 7:23am


Wow!great many emotions with just those lines.

Sun, August 30th, 2020 9:33am


Thank you!

Sun, August 30th, 2020 6:05am


Eyes can convey a sea of emotions and you've illustrated this so well KatV. The poem is so adorable and makes anyone who reads it, want to have a romantic experience like it.

Wed, September 16th, 2020 4:41pm


Thank you Shika!

Wed, September 16th, 2020 2:35pm

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