the sound of the sun

Reads: 171  | Likes: 6  | Shelves: 2  | Comments: 4

  • Facebook
  • Twitter
  • Reddit
  • Pinterest
  • Invite

Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Featured Review on this writing by hullabaloo22

A lovely book of poems

 

 

lying in bed

he hears the sun rise

 

forest full of trees

trees full of birds

birds full of song

 

he rises, feels for his cane

shuffles his way outside 

to the warmth of the sun

and orchestra of birds

 

turns towards the rays

that he cannot see

opens his ear lids and 

smiles at the morning

 ©


Submitted: August 25, 2020

© Copyright 2020 clyde. All rights reserved.

Check out clyde's Book


Panther Creek mountain

Clay and Luke are brothers who live in the Appalachian Mountains during the 1950s. They live with their folks in log cabins on Panther Creek Mountain, high above the Wild Cat River. Their cousin, Sally Jane, lives with her Mama, Aunt Olive, in the same mo

  • Facebook
  • Twitter
  • Reddit
  • Pinterest
  • Invite

Add Your Comments:

Comments

hullabaloo22

Beautiful illustration of how much the ears can see.

Tue, August 25th, 2020 5:57pm

Author
Reply

Thank you in Ireland! I am so new to writing poetry, so I appreciate you picking up seeing with one's ears.

Tue, August 25th, 2020 11:12am

Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn

A beautifully thought provoking and contemplating read that could be said to be almost philosophical in essence ... Enjoyable!

Sun, August 30th, 2020 12:51pm

Author
Reply

Thank you Marvin. Yes, It could be philosophical.

Sun, August 30th, 2020 9:26am

clyde

Sun, August 30th, 2020 11:15pm

KatV

The Sound of the Sun

WOW! I absolutely LOVE this poem! I, too, HEARD your sunrise; I saw the beautiful morning you painted with words. I have absolutely no suggestions...ONLY compliments! Powerful, Picturesque Poem!!

Thu, September 17th, 2020 11:24pm

Author
Reply

Wow back to you for such a great comment. Thanks so much for hearing my sunrise!

Thu, September 17th, 2020 5:04pm

D. Thurmond aka JEF

Nicely phrased and written. Food for thought me thinks.

Sun, September 20th, 2020 6:28pm

Author
Reply

Thanks JEF

Tue, September 22nd, 2020 4:41am

Other Content by clyde