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Table of Contents
You Can Run, But You Can’t Hide
POV: Tristan: Who The Hell Was That?
Who was That Man? POV: Celestine
Here Goes Nothing. POV: Celestine
POV: Tristan: Something Has Changed
POV: Celestine: Last Man on Earth
POV: Celestine: Should I Stay?
What Do You Need? POV: Celestine
Chapter 19: Consent POV: Tristan
Chapter 21: POV: Celestine: Prey
POV: Tristan: Go Big or Go Home
POV: Celestine: Breaking Barriers
Recent Comments
Wow, what a amazing writing work.
Keep writing
This is a good start! You introduced the characters well and the dialogue between the pair definitely showed the level of friendship between them. I'd suggest to put the thoughts/inner dialogue in italics to help the reader distinguish it from the rest of the narrative. Scott does not seem like a nice person at all, I'm glad she's getting away from him (and to Spain no less!). Good job :)
Mon, September 14th, 2020 3:46pmIam enjoying this!
Thu, September 24th, 2020 8:18amVery good :)
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shubham7860s
Amazing story .
Tue, September 8th, 2020 8:10amAuthor
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Thank you! I’m so glad you’re enjoying it.
Tue, September 8th, 2020 3:57am