How He Looks At Me

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic


He looked into my eyes and I saw love;

I was the only thing in his world.

 

Then he looked into my eyes again and I saw darkness;

I was the only thing in his way. 


Submitted: October 14, 2020

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Meaghan Kalena

Oooo I like this! The contrast is awesome :D

Thu, October 22nd, 2020 2:44am

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Aw thank you :)

Thu, October 22nd, 2020 1:16pm

Penetentman

Wow so sad this happens sometimes!

Mon, October 26th, 2020 11:04pm

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I know :/ Easy to write about though!

Wed, November 4th, 2020 1:58pm

panda312

I really like it too

Tue, October 27th, 2020 3:09am

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Thank you!

Wed, November 4th, 2020 1:58pm

Prism Persona

Such a sharp contrast! Simple and powerful.

Wed, October 28th, 2020 3:00pm

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Thank you so much!

Wed, November 4th, 2020 1:57pm

Spyguy

Too bad he couldn’t see your Princess, then he’d stay forever;
If pleasing you til winces, then he would leave you NEVER!

Tue, November 10th, 2020 11:50am

Spyguy

Too bad he couldn’t see your Princess, then he’d stay forever;
If pleasing you til winces, then he would leave you NEVER!

Tue, November 10th, 2020 11:50am

Alexandra Lynsen

Love this. It takes skill to capture a reader’s attention within only a few lines, delivering an intro and a resolution. Your piece has definitely accomplished that. Well done!

Tue, November 17th, 2020 2:15pm

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Thank you so much! That is so sweet. I really appreciate it!

Tue, November 17th, 2020 2:38pm

mr. darcy

Like a first date, then the morning after. The truth often hurts.

Thu, December 3rd, 2020 4:04pm

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Yes, unfortunately :/

Mon, December 14th, 2020 5:12am

raven.

So short but so so powerful!!
Just wow :o

Mon, December 14th, 2020 8:19am

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Thank you so much!!

Mon, December 14th, 2020 5:13am

K.Essler

This was very good. It was short but said so much. Good job with this one.

Mon, December 14th, 2020 10:32am

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Thank you :)

Mon, December 14th, 2020 5:12am

Spyguy

What a difference a day makes...!

Wed, December 16th, 2020 10:18am

Ann Sepino

Four lines, but worth a thousand words and a lifetime's experience. I love its timeless quality. I also love how its brevity doesn't work against the message but enhances it. I'm so glad I clicked on this. :)

Wed, January 20th, 2021 7:49am

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Thank you :)

Fri, January 22nd, 2021 7:12pm

Stormbird Throneshaker

You never know what's on the other side of anything until it reveals itself.
This is the other side that no one wants to see but often they have experienced.
Nailed it . . . greatly so.

Fri, January 22nd, 2021 1:21am

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Thank you so much :)

Fri, January 22nd, 2021 7:11pm

Spyguy

It has been awhile, yet I DO remember this! You are unique & special, don’t let him make you feel otherwise!

Fri, January 22nd, 2021 11:19pm

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So sweet! Thank you :)

Fri, January 22nd, 2021 7:12pm

Spyguy

Such sadness, yet he continues to look, since I recall reading this classic piece a very long time ago, my sweet friend!

Sun, February 7th, 2021 8:56am

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