How He Looks At Me

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic


He looked into my eyes and I saw love;

I was the only thing in his world.

 

Then he looked into my eyes again and I saw darkness;

I was the only thing in his way. 


Submitted: October 14, 2020

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Meaghan Kalena

Oooo I like this! The contrast is awesome :D

Thu, October 22nd, 2020 2:44am

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Aw thank you :)

Thu, October 22nd, 2020 1:16pm

Penetentman

Wow so sad this happens sometimes!

Mon, October 26th, 2020 11:04pm

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I know :/ Easy to write about though!

Wed, November 4th, 2020 1:58pm

panda312

I really like it too

Tue, October 27th, 2020 3:09am

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Thank you!

Wed, November 4th, 2020 1:58pm

Prism Persona

Such a sharp contrast! Simple and powerful.

Wed, October 28th, 2020 3:00pm

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Thank you so much!

Wed, November 4th, 2020 1:57pm

Spyguy

Too bad he couldn’t see your Princess, then he’d stay forever;
If pleasing you til winces, then he would leave you NEVER!

Tue, November 10th, 2020 11:50am

Spyguy

Too bad he couldn’t see your Princess, then he’d stay forever;
If pleasing you til winces, then he would leave you NEVER!

Tue, November 10th, 2020 11:50am

Alexandra Lynsen

Love this. It takes skill to capture a reader’s attention within only a few lines, delivering an intro and a resolution. Your piece has definitely accomplished that. Well done!

Tue, November 17th, 2020 2:15pm

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Thank you so much! That is so sweet. I really appreciate it!

Tue, November 17th, 2020 2:38pm

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