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Wow so sad this happens sometimes!
Mon, October 26th, 2020 11:04pmI really like it too
Tue, October 27th, 2020 3:09amSuch a sharp contrast! Simple and powerful.
Wed, October 28th, 2020 3:00pmToo bad he couldn’t see your Princess, then he’d stay forever;
If pleasing you til winces, then he would leave you NEVER!
Too bad he couldn’t see your Princess, then he’d stay forever;
If pleasing you til winces, then he would leave you NEVER!
Love this. It takes skill to capture a reader’s attention within only a few lines, delivering an intro and a resolution. Your piece has definitely accomplished that. Well done!
Tue, November 17th, 2020 2:15pmLike a first date, then the morning after. The truth often hurts.
Thu, December 3rd, 2020 4:04pmSo short but so so powerful!!
Just wow :o
This was very good. It was short but said so much. Good job with this one.
Mon, December 14th, 2020 10:32amWhat a difference a day makes...!
Wed, December 16th, 2020 10:18amFour lines, but worth a thousand words and a lifetime's experience. I love its timeless quality. I also love how its brevity doesn't work against the message but enhances it. I'm so glad I clicked on this. :)
Wed, January 20th, 2021 7:49amYou never know what's on the other side of anything until it reveals itself.
This is the other side that no one wants to see but often they have experienced.
Nailed it . . . greatly so.
It has been awhile, yet I DO remember this! You are unique & special, don’t let him make you feel otherwise!
Fri, January 22nd, 2021 11:19pmSuch sadness, yet he continues to look, since I recall reading this classic piece a very long time ago, my sweet friend!
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Oooo I like this! The contrast is awesome :D
Thu, October 22nd, 2020 2:44amAuthor
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Aw thank you :)
Thu, October 22nd, 2020 1:16pm