Your love

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic


Your love

Constantly contemplating the thoughts that play in my mind:

 What is love ? What is the concept of seeking after and desiring something that I haven’t seen but yet felt.

They tell me the stories of who you are and your word speaks beautifully to me as I ponder upon them,

but yet it is hard to describe you,

for your love is beyond my understanding,

your love is deeper than the intertwining of my mind ,

your love move mountains,oceans and quenches eternal thirst.

 But as I seek and look upon the earth and see the creator in the creation,

you designed,

For I found your love to be out of this universe and full of the divine.

for you know the numbers of grass that grows onto the ground and yet you continue to create beauty and more beauty, 

I found your love to be more than I could see,

for it is more than I can speak,

for it is higher than this universe and deep then the sea,

for your love is the beat in my heart,

the rhythm in my mind,

the song I dance to when I am alone and out of sight,

your love is the breath in my lungs,

your love is eternal good and that is the truth,

for your love is what brought me back to you.


Submitted: October 16, 2020

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KatV

Your Love

This is a beautiful poem. It is an easy read with a nice flow for the most part. My favorite line is "your love is the breath in my lungs". WOW. That is powerful. There were a few lines that I've had to read a few times, and I still feel like something is missing ... like it is just hanging/disconnected. Maybe it was to force a rhyme?:

"But as I seek and look upon the eart and see the creator in
the creation,
you designed,
For I found your love to be out of this universe and full of the
divine."

Still, I get your point and your poem is truly beautiful. Write On!

Fri, October 16th, 2020 11:19pm

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