Falling through the darkness with you

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

Featured Review on this writing by Criss Sole

A song about being there for each other in dark times. Special thanks to Criss Sole for editing.

Man: Can you hear me calling

I echo in your head

I know you're crying. I know you're crying

Tears on your bed.

Woman: I can't believe this happened.

I know it struck you too.

But you don't need me. No you don't need me.

Or perhaps you do.

Man: I looked a little closer

Than I did before.

It's not about you. It's not about you.

It's not your fault your life's cut and torn

(Pre Chorus)

Woman: Hopes and dreams were shattered, but love will brace the blow...

...as we fall...

Man:...Down, down, down, down.

(Chorus)

Both: I'm falling through the darkness with you.

Ah na na.

Ah na na na na

There's nothing two hearts cannot get through.

Ah na na.

Ah na na na na na na!

Woman: The innocence has faded.

The fog has shown you lies.

I know you're searching. I know you're searching.

For some light to shine.

Man: The present is constricting.

The past has left its scars.

But I can soothe you.

Yes I can soothe you.

Just take my hand and we'll fly far.

(Pre Chorus)

Woman: Hopes and dreams were shattered, but love will brace the blow...

...as we fall...

Man:...Down, down, down, down.

(Chorus)

Both: I'm falling through the darkness with you.

Ah na na.

Ah na na na na

There's nothing two hearts cannot get through.

Ah na na.

Ah na na na na na na!


Submitted: October 20, 2020

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Criss Sole

I loved reading it again.
It certainly has some significance for me now, since you told me when you wrote this.
"Hopes and dreams where shattered..." I can relate all too well.
I loved one of the last lines "There's nothing two hearts cannot get through." No matter how bad things get, there is still some hope.
Beautiful poem!

Wed, October 21st, 2020 4:57am

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Thanks so much! It's good for me going through these oldies of mine. Listening to one now intact lol. Always felt this song was about two friends or lovers being there in the darkest of times

Tue, October 20th, 2020 10:00pm

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