----- "Come Find Us, Dave!" ----- UNDERGROUND HOUSE-WORLD: DAVE & MAX ! --- The 'SECRET UNDERGROUND CLOSET' ! ---- ( Part 1.) ---- Video Game ! ---- MAX #545! -- 'Red Lamp & Cigarettes' ?!

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----- FIND US! ------ UNDERGROUND HOUSE-WORLD: DAVE and MAX ! ----- 'Come Find Us, Dave!' ------- THE SECRET UNDERGROUND PLACE ! -------- From June of 1999. ----- PART 1 ! ------ VIDEO GAME! ----- Bizarre 'Red Lamp and Cigarettes' !


''DAVE & MAX - THE SECRET UNDERGROUND AREA!".  (Not the original title.  I will be releasing these in parts because it's quite lengthy.  I'm also trying to keep each part shorter for a less daunting read.  From 1999.  THIS BOOK HAS BEEN EDITED.)

(The Original illustrations that went with this story are lost.)

 

NOTE: 

----- (Here it is!  The one that started it all!  --  This is my first fantasy story (mini-book) I ever wrote when I was a kid.  ----  Written in 1999.

HIGHLY inspired by the movie "Little Monsters".  I tried to retain the original writing of the story as much as possible. ----  However, I corrected many spelling and grammar mistakes just for the sake of it appearing readable.  Some text was removed.  This is edited.

It was a total mess. ---- This was copied from a crumbling NOTEBOOK to my computer.  Some of the text has been lost. The date at the top of the first page says June 25, 1999.  I DO NOT remember writing this! ----- YES! THIS IS REALLY FROM 1999.  Yes! I am old!  - IT'S TO BE EXPECTED.) 

 

 

 


MY FIRST BOOK:  DAVE AND MAX: THE LITTLE MONSTERS.

 

June 25, 1999


  Hello! ---  My name is Dave.  I am 11 years old.  Nice to meet you.  I'm starting middle school next year in the FALL. -- I never tried to write a fantasy book before.  This is my first one kids!  ROCK ON!

 

 This is a fantasy book about this really weird man  who lives down in a hidden place underneath my bed.

By the way!  My room is in the basement.  My room is really interesting.  I have posters on my walls.  They are posters of movie  Star Wars "the Phantom Menace".  My parents took me to see it in the theater.

I really liked the movie Star Wars "the Phantom Menace".  I like the way how Queen Amaidalla looks!  She's cool looking. 

 


  I also have a tv, a radio (cdplayer)  and a Super Nintendo.  --- I really play alot of video games.  I love RPG games!  Me and my dad play CastleVania IV and Donkey Kong Country 2 alot.

I have a Nintendo 1 system too.  I also really love Britney Spears !  What a babe!


 Let me tell you my story now okay?:

 

I went to sleep when I played my videogame(s) last night. 

 

(Which one did I play last night?---  Chrono Trigger, duh!  I'm in the future world.  The winter futureworld where you can find the sky castle of QUEEN ZEAL.)

 


"BANG!  CREAAAKK ! ----CRUNCH-MUNCH MUNCH!"  Someone left chocolate chip cookies in my room.  I can hear them eating cookies!


----(NO PLEASE!  CLOSE YOUR MOUTH! )---  I think in my head.
 

That loud sound wakes me up from sleeping!  Who? ---  What is that noise?  I jump out of my Racecar bed!


No one is inside my room!------ Where did he go?----Now I hear a weird noise!

 


--"Meow, mew!"--  my cat meows!  She has white and black stripes.  Her name is Snowie.  She is a manecoon.


---"Snowie!---  Which way did the eating come from?" ---  I say. 


---"Meow, meowsie!" --- she meows.

 

Then she jumps underneath my racecar bed!!

 


OH NO!  Did Snowie eat the cookie(s) trail?  The chocolate chip cookies are leading under my bed!!  Now what?  I don't understand!  Snowie is a bad kitty!

 

---"Snowie!-Bad kitty!  Where did the cookies go?"----- I say.


No meow from Snowie.

 


---"Hello, Snowie?  Are you down there?  Hello?  Snowie?"----- I say.

 

Now what?  Where did Snowie go now?  Is she under my bed?


I look underneath my racecar bed.

 

My cat is now gone!

 

There is a weird red lamp under my bed! ---- How did that lamp get there?  There is cigarettes and a can of beer (BUDLIGHT) sitting there, by the lamp.

 


Oh man!  Where did they go?

 

I see a crumbled up piece of notebook paper there, by the red lamp!  Under my bed.  HE LEFT ME A NOTE!  I grab the paper really quickly!

 

 


There's writing on the notebook paper!  Oh man, listen to this:

 

 

DAVID,


"DANGER!  DANGER!-WE ARE IN CONTROL OF TRANSMISSION!" (NOTE:-Where did this come from?)


TO FIND YOUR CAT , YOU HAVE TO COME DOWN HERE!

 

TO FIND YOUR CAT SNOWIE !----  YOU HAVE TO keep FOLLOWING THE TRAIL OF CHOCOLATE COOKIES!


THERE IS A RED LAMP UNDER YOUR BED, DAVE!  Use that lamp and go under your bed.  Keep going!  It will take you down here to where we are!


KEEP EATING THE CHOCOLATE CHIP COOKIES.  THEY WILL MAKE YOU STRONG!

 

COME FIND US, DAVE!


P. S.  BRING ME MY CIGARETTES AND BUDLIGHT (trademark), DAVE!  I FORGOT THEM!  OK? 

 

---- xxx-----  SIGNED ---xxxxx----- MAX!  (LITTLE MONSTER #545!)

 

 

 

<  End of Part 1. >

 

 

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Submitted: October 22, 2020

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