An Invitation

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Cover image: Joshua Fuller on Unsplash.

An Invitation

 

Knowing last,

I drove

to find me.

There was something

I needed.

Everything!

To reach this

I picked,

hopped

and tapped.

A moment later

the hour was creeping up;

I slid the window open

to invite me in.


Submitted: October 23, 2020

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Mike S.

A fine 'me' poemer, Hull

Fri, October 23rd, 2020 9:16pm

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Thanks for giving it a read, Mike.

Sat, October 24th, 2020 11:38am

Robert Helliger

A dramatic, and well written poem, Hull.

Sat, October 24th, 2020 12:10am

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Thanks for giving it a read, Robert.

Sat, October 24th, 2020 11:37am

KatV

The ending surprised me and I loved it. You are such a magical writer! Another fine piece of work!

Sat, October 24th, 2020 12:21am

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Thanks so much for giving this a read. I'm glad you enjoyed this one.

Sat, October 24th, 2020 11:37am

Craig Davison

Great sentiment expressed here. To find oneself, or discover one's role and place in the scheme of things. Maybe I'm reading too much into it, but everyone's journey is different and personal. I usually end up trying to lose and escape myself, and my many demons. Whisky and cigarettes for breakfast helps, but I wouldn't necessarily recommend it to everyone. Nice work.

Sat, October 24th, 2020 3:31am

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Honestly, I might just give that a go. Things can't get much worse.
Thanks, Craig.

Sat, October 24th, 2020 11:36am

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