Confusing Feelings

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

taken from my book, "Dominance Issues"

Confusing Feelings


I wanna kill you

Because I love you too much

I don't know what it cost

To not be in love

But I am not willing to pay

To not be in love

You can't cast your wicked spells on me

To make me let you live

I am going to take your life

Your body is all mine

Love me, like a hooker

Tell me "we're not over"

I want you for always

Never gonna get away

Play with me

You have my heart

Stay laid up with me, tonight

Let's fall apart

All we are

Are funny lies

You are never gonna be mine

It's already over

Bitch, goodbye

Get out of my heart

Stop wrecking my mind

I love you forever

Don't lie to me, you hooker

I just want your body

You just gotta be my lover

Love me, like no other

I promise you, I can change

I'll show you

By blowing your brains

You'll splatter

On the carpet

You'll never survive my love

Don't talk to me

You're just a slut

You were just an easy fuck

One I could achieve

Like you don't give a fuck

Say you'll always love me

Say you'll never mean it

You are not my lover

It is really over

Don't taunt and tease me

Just never leave me

Just let me kill you

You are my ev'rything

Let me love you into pieces


I wanna mangle your mind

I wanna fondle your heart

I wanna feel it beat

In the palm of my hand

"You are my woman"

You are, because I say

Just let me love you

Let me feel you in my veins

Like an eternal spike of smack

Kellog's doesn't want you back

Only I can love you now

But I can't stop wanting you dead

I know I really love you

But the flesh gets in the way

Standing between me

And the way that I love you

So I'll only love you a little

'Cause I SO wanna kill you


10-19-'20 #2

D. L. Cannon

Submitted: October 26, 2020

© Copyright 2020 DLCannon. All rights reserved.

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This is really good! I can tell you put a lot of feeling into it, it was incredibly good!

Tue, October 27th, 2020 4:21am


Thank you! This is actually my default kind of writing. It was real easy for me. I'm trying to write more positive, but have been failing lately, 'cause I have nobody to be in love with, since the shutdown. Which, in turn would revert back to poems about a clack of confidence to approach the woman, but at least she would not be a fictional character, like the one in here. But thanks for your worlds of reflect! :)

Wed, October 28th, 2020 5:28pm