First Words After A Blue Moon

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Garden Poems and Musings

With a pen in my hand

and an old book -

It's been a while since I last thought.

With an empty mind

and a dark night, 

I went so far looking for a word.

Like today's rain

someone appears

in my distant thoughts, but near my heart.

With a heartfelt flutter

and awaiting dream,

first words are penned after a blue moon.


- mila zhen

(2020 11 04)

Submitted: November 06, 2020

© Copyright 2020 Zhen Mila. All rights reserved.

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Ann Sepino

This was so sweet. I can almost imagine someone sitting at their desk, blank paper in hand, pining for someone they know and secretly love. Thanks for writing and sharing this!

Fri, November 6th, 2020 1:47pm

JE Falcon

Very nice, flowed very well and took me along for the ride.

Fri, November 6th, 2020 4:55pm

LE. Berry

Nice reflection of all writers thoughts at certain times Zhen...

Fri, November 6th, 2020 9:05pm


What a beautiful piece of poetry. Very nice flow to your words.

Fri, November 6th, 2020 9:24pm

Zhen Mila

Thank you Ann Sepino, JE Falcon, LE Berry and Hullabaloo22 for the lovely comments and the love given. ????

Sat, November 7th, 2020 8:46am

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