Tumbling Into Chaos

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Cover image: Solen Feyissa on Unsplash.

Tumbling Into Chaos

 

Oh, the colors!

Glorious colors

until they become too much,

or I too little.

Then there’s no glory,

no vision,

but a sinking sense

of becoming overwhelmed.

There’s no form,

no substance

as I tumble down

into a world full of chaos.

No hint of sense,

no sense of meaning;

no good or bad,

no up or down.

My world has cracked,

collapsed,

my perception shattered

as I spin and fall -

a descent that leads

to madness.

 

 


Submitted: November 17, 2020

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Mike S.

A fine 'swirling madness' poem, Hull

Tue, November 17th, 2020 10:53pm

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Swirling madness is my life a lot of the time. Thanks, Mike.

Wed, November 18th, 2020 11:46am

KatV

You have me whirling in your colorful world of chaos. Nicely done Hull!

Wed, November 18th, 2020 1:16am

Author
Reply

Thanks so much for reading!

Wed, November 18th, 2020 11:45am

ratwood2

A vivid description of my day all too often.

Wed, November 18th, 2020 5:57pm

Author
Reply

Mine too, ratwood2. Thanks so much for reading.

Wed, November 18th, 2020 11:44am

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