Featured Review on this writing by KatV
"This is a very interesting, well-written poem, Clyde. I love that you ended by circling back to where you were when you woke up...the dog trotting down the street toward the church that you didn't recognize. Very clever! Write On!"
woods filled with snow
I walked through woods
as they filled with snow
a winters walk to fill my lungs
with cold december chill
I came to a small rise
one that I did not know
where did this hill come from
how was I unaware
I looked for familiar sightings
but found none
nothing seemed identifiable
I walked to the edge of the hill
and peered over the edge
a small village lie below
smoke curled from chimneys
a small church in the distance
its steeple towering above the
other houses
a bell ringing from
the tall phallus calling
worshipers to enter the
womb for the ministers oratory
men women and children
without faces
finely dressed
came from far and near
for the morning blessing
or to relieve themselves
of the weeks guilt they
had accumulated
soon voices sang
clear as a bell
across the valley and
into the hill
where I stood
a dog trotted down the lane
past the church
I watched and waited
for the service to conclude
the snow became heavy
pushing down suffocating
me
suddenly
I awoke on a thick rug
In front of my
roaring fireplace
realizing that a dream
had ended
but not in a good way
I did not have answers
to where the village was
who the people were
why were they faceless
why was the dog trotting
down the street
my dog came over
and licked my face
he wanted to go out
I let him out
he trotted down the street
towards a church I did not recognize
Submitted: November 23, 2020
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KatV
This is a very interesting, well-written poem, Clyde. I love that you ended by circling back to where you were when you woke up...the dog trotting down the street toward the church that you didn't recognize. Very clever! Write On!
Tue, November 24th, 2020 12:29amAuthor
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Thanks KatV,
Tue, November 24th, 2020 5:53amI appreciate your picking up on these. I guess I'm a story/poem writer. Love to try to write leaving the reader to fill in some of the blanks.
Thanks again,
Clyde