Sin Of Man

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Sea of sin....

Sin Of Man

Man thinks

Sin is cool,

And sails

On a ship of fools,

Through the ocean

Of the devil's stools,

That the wise mistake

As jewels.

Submitted: December 11, 2020

Religion and Spirituality religion

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This is good but why didn't you finish it , you ran out of ink ?
SB

Fri, December 11th, 2020 10:04pm

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Thanks sb I thought it was finished, I will have another look I am in hospital and things are a bit rushed!

Fri, December 11th, 2020 2:25pm

It is finished SB

Fri, December 11th, 2020 11:04pm

Get Well Soon, Tom! Try to conserve your energy. else you'll burn out which is bad for the poetic stamina,
HJ x

Sat, December 12th, 2020 1:06pm

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Thanks very much HJ, I am home now for awhile with the hippy hippy shake!

Sat, December 12th, 2020 1:48pm

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