Why am I a loser

Poem by: Penetentman

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Why am I a loser?

It feels like God hates me

Is this his love to me?

Many more wicked and righteous then me thrive

Am I the only one?

Am I blinded by my prejudice?

Am I blessed or cursed?

Is this life of mine really good or evil?

Why am I not happy?

I'm full but still hungry!

I'm calm but so angry!

Why cant I feel the win?

Why am I a loser?

Oh well...Lord,Your will be done

Submitted: December 14, 2020

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Angel Acuna-Robinson

The internal personal inventory of my most intimate moments, wiping the steam from the medicine cabinet mirror is reflected in this piece. Very connecting work.

Mon, December 14th, 2020 4:08am

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Thanks I wanted to be a voice for the everyman's inner darkness. Mine included.

Sun, December 13th, 2020 8:17pm

AFRODITE STATHI

Sometimes i feel like you.I think God hates me and this feeling is so dreadful. Good work.Made me think.

Mon, December 14th, 2020 7:03am

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Well thank you for reading. I can assure you that I know God loves us. He certainly hates what we have done to his creation and some choices we make, but he is patient and forgiving. If he allowed his son Jesus and the righteous man job to suffer,he will let us. We often criticize God for allowing pain, but I say it exist as a great teaching tool. 1 so you dont forget where you came from, and 2. So you dont forget where you could end up. I hope I have giving you something to think on at least. Comments like yours are a blessing to me. Sometimes, life sucks, no one cares, and what are you gonna do...but tommorw the sun will come up anyways. God bless.

Mon, December 14th, 2020 2:35am