Once...

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Cover image: Pawel Czerwinski on Unsplash.

Once...

 

Once, I thought we’d make it;

we’d find a way to thrive

but so far it’s eluded us

no matter how we strive.

 

Once, I thought we’d make it,

no matter what the cost;

but, in the sea I’m drowning,

as it seems that we... we’ve lost.


Submitted: December 15, 2020

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Mike S.

Another sad but excellent poem, Hull

Tue, December 15th, 2020 9:16pm

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I'm sorry; I don't often write upbeat poems. Thanks for giving this a read.

Thu, December 17th, 2020 10:38am

Keke Serene

Very nice, Hulls! Excellent rhyme scheme

Wed, December 16th, 2020 12:49am

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Thanks so much for giving this a read. Oh, and that's a really cool looking tree!

Thu, December 17th, 2020 10:33am

Jeff Bezaire

A beautiful expression of pain, Hully.

Thu, December 17th, 2020 7:33pm

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Thanks so much for reading, Jeff.

Sun, December 27th, 2020 5:39am

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