The Pick-Up

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic

Horror. Humour. Flash Fiction. See You At The Bar...

The Pick-Up


  She sits next to him on a bar stool.

- Hi

  She nods her head.

- Will you join me for dinner?

  She smiles.

- Can I buy you some teeth?

  Behind the bar are hundreds of jars of

dentures. She points to one. He pays

the toothtender. She puts them on her

gums. She looks even more beautiful 

than she did before when she smiles...

- Come on, let's go and eat!

  Too late, her new teeth rip open his throat...

Submitted: December 16, 2020

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D. Thurmond aka JEF

No way! You forgot the denture adhesive, LOL.

Thu, December 17th, 2020 1:11am


Thanks for reading JEF, her mouth had a tight fit, or at least the guy hoped it would!

Wed, December 16th, 2020 5:22pm

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