My Jigsaw Mind

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

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My Jigsaw Mind

 

Little bits and pieces,

fragments of a picture,

jumbled up and tossed around

making one peculiar mixture.

 

Some will fit together

to make some sense of life,

but mostly they won’t link at all

and cause me mental strife.


Submitted: December 20, 2020

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Mike S.

The jigsaw of life's a real bitch; excellent, Hull

Sun, December 20th, 2020 7:54pm

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Sure is. I'm sure I've mislaid some of the pieces along the way. Thanks, Mike.

Tue, December 22nd, 2020 10:33am

Steven P. Pody

Good thought, concisely expressed ...tidy poetry bite.

Sun, December 20th, 2020 10:12pm

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Thanks so much for giving this a read. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Tue, December 22nd, 2020 10:29am

tom mcmullen

Very true Hullabaloo, what the Buddhists call the monkey mind, chatter...chatter...

Mon, December 21st, 2020 1:06am

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You could well be right, Tom. It certainly goes on and on. Thanks so much for giving this a read.

Tue, December 22nd, 2020 10:27am

Bert Broomberg

Great poem, Hull. I keep thinking that life must be extremely boring to those who think everything in their lives is crystal clear. Usually, the ones that realize some pieces are missing are far more interesting to talk to.

Mon, December 21st, 2020 4:51pm

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Ha! Well in that case you and me would get along great, Bert. Thanks so much for giving this a read!

Tue, December 22nd, 2020 10:26am

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