I Am Xade: Night

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic

WHAT A MESS!!! This is the most convoluted, overly explained installment in the entire series. The main reason why there's so much exposition is because I made the stupid decision to make this a first person narrative a la Twilight or Hunger Games. Here's the thing though, those books worked because for one they were actually books and not halve baked novellas and another they didn't have nearly as much exposition on stuff that didn't matter. I also HATE Jeremy Rousing as he is a pathetic perverted man who looks at Playboy even though he's married and has 2 kids. The worst part is I didn't even give him any comeuppance for doing something he clearly knows is wrong. And any sympathy you'd expect to have for Jason is utterly decimated when he kills a baby. "But he's a monster" That's no excuse! There needs to be a line drawn for how much a villain can get away with for the audience to not hate him so much that they groan every time he appears. It's this kind of storytelling that made me stop watching JoJo's Bizzare Adventure several episodes in. I honestly can't believe I thought this was good writing back then -.-

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MCERS HQ

After teleporting back to the apartment, Tracy sat me on the couch while Matilda placed her hands on my broken arm. Tracy then voluntee... Read Chapter

Wilma's Birth

I asked Matilda about her parents during dinner the week after I became pregnant; she said that they were very loving and caring parent... Read Chapter

Missing Sunshine

After Wilma was born, we headed back to London and just took it easy for a few days; or at least tried to because monsters and evil wiz... Read Chapter

Too Broken To Fight

I heard a thumping noise coming from my room; we went in and saw my orb on the floor bouncing like a ball outside my purse. I picked it... Read Chapter

Battle In Barbados

After clashing fists with him, he swung his other arm at me; I ducked and threw him into a nearby empty car. I then aimed my weapon at ... Read Chapter

Epilogue

That Saturday, we had a large funeral for everyone Jason killed; my Dad, Abby, Angel, Betty, Brooke, Eva, and her infant son, Fredward,... Read Chapter

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