I Am Xade: Night

WHAT A MESS!!! This is the most convoluted, overly explained installment in the entire series. The main reason why there's so much exposition is because I made the stupid decision to make this a first person narrative a la Twilight or Hunger Games. Here's the thing though, those books worked because for one they were actually books and not halve baked novellas and another they didn't have nearly as much exposition on stuff that didn't matter. I also HATE Jeremy Rousing as he is a pathetic perverted man who looks at Playboy even though he's married and has 2 kids. The worst part is I didn't even give him any comeuppance for doing something he clearly knows is wrong. And any sympathy you'd expect to have for Jason is utterly decimated when he kills a baby. "But he's a monster" That's no excuse! There needs to be a line drawn for how much a villain can get away with for the audience to not hate him so much that they groan every time he appears. It's this kind of storytelling that made me stop watching JoJo's Bizzare Adventure several episodes in. I honestly can't believe I thought this was good writing back then -.-