Forgive Me?

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A prompted poem.

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Forgive Me?

Will you want to see me?

Or did I go to far?

Should I walk along your path

or drive off in the car?

If you do forgive me

fill your house with light,

a glow that is so welcoming

it fills me with delight.

But if I’m not forgiven

don’t bother saying why,

just put one candle in the window

to say goodbye.

Submitted: December 30, 2020

Poetry forgiveness goodbye sign

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A fine 'lighter or candle' poem, Hull

Wed, December 30th, 2020 7:21pm

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This was very much a prompted piece. Thanks so much for reading it.

Mon, January 11th, 2021 10:11am

...to say a last goodbye. ...or seek another star? Sad, poignant and with a tender, and softly bitter touch, Lady H.

Wed, December 30th, 2020 10:07pm

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Thanks so much for the lovely comment, Steven.

Mon, January 11th, 2021 10:07am

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