In Her Eyes

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

An original poem about perspective.

In her eyes, life is an amusement park

Cloud transforms into marshmallows

The stars in the sky are a crowd to sing for

The rain is her own personal shower to dance in

The crowded subways are smiles worth always greeting

The moon is a trusted friend to share secrets too

Snow is a blanket of chill to frolic in 

Work was a carnival of laughs and teamwork


And though in my eyes the earth was as mundane as always

In her eyes I was the world 

And that was enough to change mine


Submitted: January 03, 2021

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Bert Broomberg

Great poem. I enjoyed reading it.

Mon, January 4th, 2021 2:32pm


Thank you, always look forward to your feedback

Tue, January 12th, 2021 6:09am

Gloria Dale

Yet again, another lovely poem and I closely relate to it. Thank you for writing it, Oreo.

Tue, January 12th, 2021 3:13pm

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