Rainbow

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Just a short poem a little about being human.

Most of the time, I think I know who I am

But once in awhile, I feel like there can be two different sides of me

 

Usually, I’m like the sunshine - cheerful and positive

But the weather won’t always be sunny 24/7

 

The clouds slowly roll in, 

it might start to rain

lightning strikes,

and thunder booms

 

Then after a bit, the storm goes away

The sun comes back out,

a rainbow appears

And I feel like me again.

 


Submitted: January 04, 2021

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Bert Broomberg

A very nice poem.

Mon, January 4th, 2021 2:11pm

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Thank you so much.

Mon, January 4th, 2021 6:53am

Steven P. Pody

Being a good poet isn't just stringing words together. Be a human impacting and being impacted by her world and life. Be a writer of passion! Am glad you are like sunshine. Being upbeat and optimistic will always trump the introspective whiner. I think that you have promise - now go make your craft and your world better, ...and enjoy the heck out of it all. SPP

Tue, January 5th, 2021 12:54am

Author
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Thank you!! I will! The first part is pretty deep, it made me think, which is great! Hope you have a wonderful day/night!

Mon, January 4th, 2021 5:37pm

88 fingers

Very good poem. I can imagine the images that you have created.

Tue, January 5th, 2021 1:05am

Author
Reply

Thank you so much! And yes, I'll definitely check your work when I have time.

Mon, January 4th, 2021 5:31pm

Naomi10012

Oh no, that was someone else I think. But I'll still check out everyone's work here when I have time!

Tue, January 5th, 2021 1:34am

Archia

We all have times where it's sunny and we all have times where it's a storm. I really enjoyed your poem and how you showed that part of life which we all experience.

Tue, January 5th, 2021 11:31am

Author
Reply

Yes, indeed. Thank you for your kind words. I thought that would be a relatable poem to most.

Tue, January 5th, 2021 5:31am

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