Out of The Darkness

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Thrillers  |  House: Abandoned

Robin Blakemoore was kidnapped as a child and held for years before she escaped years later. The years of rape and torture have left her emotionally scared. Years after her escape she is targeted by a group that may have ties to her original kidnapper.

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Into The Light

After years of captivity Robin Blakemoore sees a chance to escapes and takes it.
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"Innocents" - typo.

Atmospheric start. If you were revising you might make more of your subject's mental/emotional state when contemplating cannibalism (currently instrumental)?

Thu, January 7th, 2021 12:42pm


Thank Adam for the suggestions. This is only the first draft so when I do start the rewrite I will keep your suggestion about the mental and emotional state of Robin in mind.

Thu, January 7th, 2021 5:53am


A truly dark and disturbing opening to your story.
However, it kept me gripped tightly in its grasp.
I look forward to seeing where this tale will take us.

Your description of the darkness and the horror the main character was going through, was done really well.

Mon, January 11th, 2021 3:07pm

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