Out of The Darkness

Book by: Ian D. Mooby

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Robin Blakemoore was kidnapped as a child and held for years before she escaped years later. The years of rape and torture have left her emotionally scared. Years after her escape she is targeted by a group that may have ties to her original kidnapper.

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Chapter 1

Into The Light

After years of captivity Robin Blakemoore sees a chance to escapes and takes it.
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AdamCarlton

"Innocents" - typo.

Atmospheric start. If you were revising you might make more of your subject's mental/emotional state when contemplating cannibalism (currently instrumental)?

Thu, January 7th, 2021 12:42pm

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Thank Adam for the suggestions. This is only the first draft so when I do start the rewrite I will keep your suggestion about the mental and emotional state of Robin in mind.

Thu, January 7th, 2021 5:53am

Celtic-Scribe63

A truly dark and disturbing opening to your story.
However, it kept me gripped tightly in its grasp.
I look forward to seeing where this tale will take us.

Your description of the darkness and the horror the main character was going through, was done really well.