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A truly dark and disturbing opening to your story.
However, it kept me gripped tightly in its grasp.
I look forward to seeing where this tale will take us.
Your description of the darkness and the horror the main character was going through, was done really well.
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AdamCarlton
"Innocents" - typo.
Thu, January 7th, 2021 12:42pmAtmospheric start. If you were revising you might make more of your subject's mental/emotional state when contemplating cannibalism (currently instrumental)?
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Thank Adam for the suggestions. This is only the first draft so when I do start the rewrite I will keep your suggestion about the mental and emotional state of Robin in mind.
Thu, January 7th, 2021 5:53am