Out of The Darkness

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Thrillers  |  House: Abandoned

Robin Blakemoore was kidnapped as a child and held for years before she escaped years later. The years of rape and torture have left her emotionally scared. Years after her escape she is targeted by a group that may have ties to her original kidnapper.

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Into The Light


After years of captivity Robin Blakemoore sees a chance to escapes and takes it.
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In the Dead of The Night


Five years after her escape from The Mole Man, Robin Blakemoore lives in fear of his return.
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Chapter 3


A call in the middle of the night brings Sheriff Dirk Cuddlebe to the home of Robin Blakemoore.


Suggestions for chapter titles would be appreciated.
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Chapter 4


Sheriff Cuddlebe begins looking into the death of his deputy.
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Chapter 5


Sheriff Cuddlebe begins to looking into why his deputy would commit suicide.
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Chapter 6


Cuddlebe continues his investigation into his deputy as the FBI shows up on the scene.
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Recent Comments

AdamCarlton

"Innocents" - typo.

Atmospheric start. If you were revising you might make more of your subject's mental/emotional state when contemplating cannibalism (currently instrumental)?

Thu, January 7th, 2021 12:42pm

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Thank Adam for the suggestions. This is only the first draft so when I do start the rewrite I will keep your suggestion about the mental and emotional state of Robin in mind.

Thu, January 7th, 2021 5:53am

Celtic-Scribe63

A truly dark and disturbing opening to your story.
However, it kept me gripped tightly in its grasp.
I look forward to seeing where this tale will take us.

Your description of the darkness and the horror the main character was going through, was done really well.

Mon, January 11th, 2021 3:07pm

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I want to add some to that, something somebody suggested, but that will wait until I get the first draft done. Thanks for commenting.

Sun, January 31st, 2021 11:59am

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