Reads: 72  | Likes: 0  | Shelves: 0  | Comments: 0

  • Facebook
  • Twitter
  • Reddit
  • Pinterest
  • Invite

Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

Something I wrote in the style of the great Charles Bukowski.

I was twenty-two years old when I first bedded a woman.

“You’re still a virgin?”

“I am!”

She was quite surprised when she heard that. It was quite uncommon for a man to still be a virgin at that age. Of course, I have fantasised about being with a woman, but due to the lack of any social skills, I never got around to it.

It wasn’t until I started my second meaningless job that I found a woman who was willing to go all the way with me. At least now I was getting fucked by something else than life. 

Excited as I was, I put on some music, Sloe Gin because I wanted to take things slow.

I wanted to take my time to please her. But I was inexperienced, so after the second verse, I was done for.

I gave it my everything, even though I wasn’t sure it felt the same for her.

“There, you’re not a virgin anymore!”

Submitted: January 09, 2021

© Copyright 2021 Nick Van loy. All rights reserved.

  • Facebook
  • Twitter
  • Reddit
  • Pinterest
  • Invite

Add Your Comments:

Facebook Comments

Boosted Content from Other Authors

Short Story / Mystery and Crime

Short Story / Non-Fiction

Book / Non-Fiction

Writing Contest / Flash Fiction

Other Content by Nick Van loy

Book / Young Adult

Book / Action and Adventure