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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Poem that hopefully makes you smile!

Life no matter which way you look at it is unfair

Though I promise you there are gorgeous things out there

Like how the stunning sun greets you every morning

Or how the stars light up the brilliant sky without warning


What about the first bite out of a delicious sweet

Compare it to listening to your favorite song’s captivating drumbeat

How about that hot shower that washes away the aches of the day

Feels as warm as smelling the enchanting scents of a local cafe


Yes life can be terrible, but also amazing

There are so many hidden gems that are worth savoring

However, there’s still one I’ve been waiting on for a while

And it’s finally being able to experience your wonderful smile


Submitted: January 18, 2021

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Bert Broomberg

What a nice thought. Well done.

Tue, January 19th, 2021 5:06pm


I love this poem!
The descriptions are so simple and classic, yet so deep and heartfelt. Beautiful really :)
Keep the good work up, I hope to hear more of your wonderfully uplifting writing.

Tue, January 26th, 2021 2:50am


Thank you so much! I'm so glad it was able to reach you and you enjoyed it! I hope you keep reading my writing.

Tue, January 26th, 2021 8:23am


I'll most definitely check out some more of your stuff!

Tue, January 26th, 2021 9:18pm

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