The Subjective You

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

Featured Review on this writing by AdamCarlton


You know what you don't know.

Fantasy goes free and

There is no need to report the incident

While

Vivid memory will never see its family again.

 

Suspicious inquiry,

Without physical injuries or perhaps if

The bruising has simply healed,

Then

Please contact another agency.

 

We are not on that kind of high alert,

We are not that kind of organization,

Slipping someone a drug,

Cheating,

Just for the hell of it.

 

Please mail your complaint to

The address on the form.

The extremely important person

Will

File it appropriately.


Submitted: January 21, 2021

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AdamCarlton

Beautifully surreal. Wisps of insight stalk the reader, circle at the edge of view.

Thu, January 21st, 2021 9:12am

Author
Reply

Thank you Adam. Even your review is lovely writing.

Thu, January 21st, 2021 9:46am

hullabaloo22

I've got to agree with Adam. There is a very surreal feel to this piece. Nice writing!

Fri, January 22nd, 2021 7:19pm

Author
Reply

Thank you!

Sat, January 23rd, 2021 9:47am

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