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"This is basically a poem about everyday life. Not a physical activity, but mostly a psychological aspect of life. Doesn't matter how rich or successful you are, we all have boulders to push up a hill. Very good take on us humans."
Uphill Blues
When did this rock become a boulder,
this slope become a hill?
I guess the way to reach the top
is through some yet mastered skill.
I’ll pause here for a moment,
my feet I’ll safely brace;
I’m going to reach the hilltop,
but please don’t turn this to a race.
Gravity’s against me,
and this boulder weighs a ton;
sometimes I’d like to just give up,
and wish I’d not begun.
But I have to keep on pushing,
find some way to keep strong,
for if I let the pressure off
I’ll be squashed before too long.
One foot and then another,
my arms they surely ache;
what does this hill demand from me?
How much can I take?
The sweat is dripping from my brow,
my arms and legs do tremble,
I wish I knew just how I could
this boulder disassemble.
Perhaps there’s some solution
if I swallow up my pride,
I need to edge around a bit
and leap straight to the side.
I don’t trust my reaction times,
the ground’s becoming slicker;
if I stop with this eternal push
gravity will turn out quicker.
And so I simply plod along,
the boulder looms above
and it forces all my strength
to focus on the shove.
If I lose my footing,
or forget there is no rush,
this boulder will roll backwards
and then me it’s gonna crush.
Submitted: January 23, 2021
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I can empathize with this struggle, hul. Well written poem. I do believe that when you get to the top, it will have been worth the effort. True gratification must be earned.
Sat, January 23rd, 2021 8:01pmThis is basically a poem about everyday life. Not a physical activity, but mostly a psychological aspect of life. Doesn't matter how rich or successful you are, we all have boulders to push up a hill. Very good take on us humans.
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Mike S.
A great question for us, Hull
Sat, January 23rd, 2021 7:53pmAuthor
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I don't think the mountain has a top. It just goes on and on and on. Thanks, Mike.
Fri, January 29th, 2021 4:56am