Should I?

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Warning: Early (and horrible) work from 5th grade

Only for patient people!

Don't read it, if you HATE long spaces!!

It was just a first poem (really?), since boredom made me do it

So, Excuse the horrible grammar.. And lots of unnecessary words, okay?




Peace!

Should I?

 

 

 

It was a silent night,

A boy went to my hut,

Looking for a fight,

Don't know how to make him shut.

 

Silly me, oh silly me,

Should I let him continue,

Or make him stop like a referee?

As if this isn't actually what I knew.

 

I don't even know,

Why can't I choose fast?

Then he gives me his blow

I don't even know if I'd last.

 

It was so strong as it could break my whole body,

At least, I still got to see another day,

As I opened my eyes, I see myself being bloody,

And I can't even move my head in the same way!

 

For another time, I heard heavy steps,

Was it still the same boy who had me beaten?

This dream might be complex!

Or isn't this the end of what had he done?

 

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After that, I hear the footsteps again,

 

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I did not realize that I can never move again, 

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You may realize this poem was going to be crazy,

My brain doesn't know that because it was lazy,

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What happened to me?

Here, lying down underground,

Due to my stupid actions,

Why didn't I make him stop?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Still reading?

 

 

It's done

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You can review others now..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Bye..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Still here???

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Bye!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Maybe this is a dream, or a nightmare,

But whatever you say,

This poetry is stupid,

Why are you still reading this?

 

Want to know more?

Want to see the thrill?

This isn't thrilling, don't worry,

Because it was just a little girl's mind, trying to drive you insane.


Submitted: February 03, 2021

© Copyright 2021 Alizzia Ward. All rights reserved.

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Comments

dreamcatcher10

All done reading! :) I actually wrote my first poem as a I think third grader... I liked yours!

*You were right that is a LOT of spaces*

Thu, February 4th, 2021 3:21pm

Author
Reply

So, you were annoyed, aren't you? Don't worry, I also liked yours, That was better!

Thu, February 4th, 2021 6:03pm

Raven Mooncrest

Not as bad as you made it out to be but yes definitely a lot of empty space. But for a first it’s really not bad at all

Fri, February 5th, 2021 5:51am

Author
Reply

Really? It also sucks since there are a lot of (stupid) dots and dashes and unnecessary numbers, but that was from fifth grade though! Thanks for your nice feedback!

Thu, February 4th, 2021 11:31pm

dreamcatcher10

No im not annoyed i found it kinda funny to scroll and scroll :D

Fri, February 5th, 2021 1:40pm

Author
Reply

Same with your Profile! Well, I think you know what's inside the dots and dashes, right? XD

Fri, February 5th, 2021 5:51am

Luna Cai

This is actually a pretty nice poem for a first! The end made me laugh :)

Fri, February 5th, 2021 3:28pm

Author
Reply

Really? How did that make you laugh? Just curious..

Sat, February 6th, 2021 2:21am

M.C.R.

I actually loved the scrolling part!
Not professional but fun :)
And the poem was also pretty good, I wrote my first at eleven, sixth grade. If you keep writing, out of boredom or just hobby, you can make some pretty awesome stuff.

Fri, February 5th, 2021 7:06pm

Author
Reply

Really? Thanks for your precious time!

Sat, February 6th, 2021 2:21am

Luna Cai

The end made me laugh because I was a little surprised to see "It was just a little girl's mind, trying to drive you insane"? I don't know, maybe my sense of humour is just off? Lol.

Sat, February 6th, 2021 3:45pm

Author
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I never knew that was funny though! I thought I was the corny person who can never crack humorous jokes! Gladly, you did.. But it seems like my young self is secretly a clown, I guess.

Sat, February 6th, 2021 7:50am

M.C.R.

No worries, This was not time consuming at all :)

Mon, February 8th, 2021 6:16pm

Author
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Really? Thank you for your consideration!

Mon, February 8th, 2021 3:22pm

M.C.R.

:)

Tue, February 9th, 2021 1:17am

panteleon

I like this poem Alizzia, poetry is always inventing new structure and leaving empty space and adding symbols is your unique blend for this poem.
Thanks for reading my poem and becoming my fan. I'm just doing likes and comments for a while so I've given you both!
If this is your first poem I'd definitely encourage you to keep writing. It seems to me that you are having a lot of fun.

Tue, February 23rd, 2021 9:37pm

Author
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Oh, thank you very much! Writing really is fun! By the way, just a question, if you have free time, will you post more?

Tue, February 23rd, 2021 6:58pm

it'ssecret

Too good for a fifth grader! By the way that was awesome.

Wed, February 24th, 2021 11:59am

Author
Reply

Haha, really? Thank you very much and I hope you to continue writing!

Wed, February 24th, 2021 4:13am

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