The Time Traveler

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Historical Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic

"Fate, is a hunter. My conscience mocked me, aggravating me like a pettish child."

While surveying the site of an ancient Scottish Highland ruin, two young archaeologist siblings in training, Montserrat and Alex, wander away from their family and find themselves trapped in an old cave and taken to another century. Lost and separated, Montserrat becomes ensnared in a life-threatening situation with a French-Scots half-breed named Bellamy Lennox. But it isn't all the comical arguments, failed attempts of escaping, and searching for her lost brother. Past the terrors she faces and learning how to accept the fate of the unknown, Montserrat is lured into a new passion she's never known before.

Table of Contents


I never thought of how or when I would die, or if I was going to die alone. The thought of death never crossed my mind until now. Death m... Read Chapter

Retrace I

He took me without my shoes. As far as I can remember, I have no recollections of what had happened. I should have seen it coming. Th... Read Chapter

Retrace II

Fate is a hunter. My conscience mocked me, aggravating me like a pettish child. The voice in my head constantly whispered to me that... Read Chapter

Retrace III

Text that are italicize are fragments that deal with time loops as well as reminiscences. This will happen throughout the story.
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Retrace IV

"I will not die!" I protested, as I unconsciously crawled backwards, unaware I was moving towards the edge of the cliff. "Who are yo... Read Chapter

Retrace V

"Did ye fin thae lass, MacDonald?!" one man shouted from the mouth of the waterfall. MacDonald looked over his shoulder. The man narrowed... Read Chapter

Retrace VI

There he saw me, dangling on the branches of a dead Hazel Tree. One arm thrown above my head and the other dangling down beside me. My le... Read Chapter

Retrace VII

A loud ringing screamed deep inside my ear, piercing my eardrums like a pair of thick knitting needles. The men's voices echoed in my ear... Read Chapter

Retrace VIII

What are they bickering about? I thought to myself. I watched intently at my older brothers. They were still at the bottom of the hill an... Read Chapter

Retrace IX

We caught up with our parents on the other side of the hill, and proceeded down the man-made path to our designated area. It was a grassy... Read Chapter

Retrace X

"I'm not so sure I like this place," Alex groaned as he reached up towards one branch of an old bending tree. He wrapped his long fingers... Read Chapter

Retrace XI

I looked over my shoulder. "Alex, you coming?" I asked. Alex nodded. We walked together side by side away from the path, trudging through... Read Chapter

Retrace XII

I smiled as I placed my hand over my heart. My eyes staring at the glowing fire beside us. My fingers slipped underneath my dirty white b... Read Chapter

Retrace XIII

"Come on, lass! Get up!" a loud voice shouted, yanking me out of my pleasant sleep. I woke up; my arms automatically reached out. I sat u... Read Chapter

Retrace XIV

Remember, little lass. I heard Mistress Abercrombie's voice in my head. The laird is related to Tavish. And she was right;... Read Chapter

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Wow. Just wow. The atmosphere you created with this chapter is amazing. I can't wait to read more. Please send me a quickee when you publish chapter 2

Sun, February 7th, 2021 12:45am


Thank you so much! I definitely will!

Sat, February 6th, 2021 9:31pm

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