Forsaken by Illusions

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Mystery and Crime  |  House: Booksie Classic

A lady in her late 25s, dark-haired, disciplined and punctual, with a mind blowing personality and amazing figure. Years ago, she was even naïve and was recognized on part of her exceptional research work in the field of biochemistry to get personally recruited by a well - funded company. However, as the incidents in her life took place one after the other, and she lost people lose to her, she became the cold - hearted sniper with a very bad temper.

She is surrounded, but still alone. Fears to trust the people around her, because they always backstab her. She tried moving moving on but is held back by society and politics as her past comes back to haunt her.

Table of Contents

A Walk in the Dark

The night seemed silent with the only noise being heard were the click-clack of a pair of heels. She was silently walking down the alley ... Read Chapter

The Unplanned Travel

10 years ago, September 11th, 2006   A young but composed woman dressed in informal clothing of a cold-shoulders white ... Read Chapter

The Break - In

12th November 1994 Thrash Whack Whack Bang Bang That is all Gavin heard before he felt his legs carry him from hi... Read Chapter

The Letter and Untold Past

Dear Gavin, I am sorry. I didn’t want you to read this letter. I wanted to tell you these things in person, hand over everything ... Read Chapter

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Nikita Ahujh

Hiya guys! I am not begging for a like or for the book to be shelved, however, please and I mean pretty please, drop a comment or a message on how you feel about this chapter and what changes you expect. It will help me improve. I am all in to taking new ideas and I will try to upload chapters weekly.

Yours truly,
Nikita

Mon, February 8th, 2021 10:26am

M.C.R.

This sounds very secretive and intriguing. I don’t know what is going to happen yet, but I know it’s good. Just one small thing you might want to tweet is the descriptions, I don’t know the main characters name, or how she looks. I love how short the chapter is, in a online book that’s very important, I tend to check how long simmering is before reading it. So, to wrap it all up, the book is great! I love it, just a pinch to the descriptions so I can get a better picture of how she looks, and her name so I can roll it out on my tongue and her a bit more of her personality.
I hope this helped and not the opposite!
~M.C.R.~

Mon, February 8th, 2021 6:57pm

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Firstly thank you so much for your time and interest in my writings =D The name was meant to hold some mystery but I totally understand about the descriptions. Descriptions help us visualize the character and I am sorry to have missed that.
It really helped and please let me know your reactions as I move ahead!
Yours truly,
Nikita Ahujh

Tue, February 9th, 2021 8:22am

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