Those Moments

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A poem that was at least in part inspired by The Cure's 'Lovesong'.

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Those Moments



when from the world it seems we’re free,

those are the times when you can be you

and I, I can be me.


Those are the moments when I feel at home,

when I feel whole or somewhat mended;

young at heart I guess we’ll be,

when you are you and I am me.


Those are the times when we can have fun,

and instead of much older we’re feeling young;

se are the moments to which I have clung

when you were you and I was me.


But it’s all a fiction inside my head

and sometimes reality takes root to spread;

reminding me painfully, bringing such dread,

of all of those words that we have never said.


No matter the distance, a world apart

I still will not come and reclaim my heart.

When you can be you and I can be me

I’ll love you for always...

an eternity.



The Cure - Lovesong

Submitted: February 11, 2021

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Mike S.

A great poem partially based on a song, Hull

Thu, February 11th, 2021 7:09pm


Only partially. Thanks, Mike.

Thu, February 11th, 2021 11:34am

Penny Scribe

Excellent poem Hul! Wonderful message.

Thu, February 11th, 2021 7:31pm


Thanks so much!

Thu, February 11th, 2021 11:35am


Lovely poem, Hully. Always great to read your inspired pieces.

Fri, February 12th, 2021 3:23am


Thanks so much for giving this a read, Reaper.

Fri, February 12th, 2021 7:58am

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