Jagged Edges

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Writing and Reviewing!

This is a poem or song piece, whichever you wanna call it. But I think I like it.

They can say what they feel,

but they don't know for real.

All that we've been through,

walls built up, knowing only blue.

Vines of despair crawling,

hearing your next door bawling.

Tossed to the ground,

that uncontrollable sound.

Of my crying,

and feeling like my whole world's dying.

Something every two minutes,

until you crossed the line, went past the limits.

No excuse,

for that, but we called a truce.

Sick of being blue,

from you.

Sci-fi movies staying up late,

go off have fun or ice skate.

We broke each other 

but fell back together,

hit one another outta bounds,

but now we're something that astounds.

Even though we're full of jagged edges.




Submitted: February 11, 2021

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If you look closely at my image that I drew you will see it looks like ridged edges and also fangs.

Thu, February 11th, 2021 7:16pm


I like how it started off on a negative note and finished off more positive :) And I'd vote that it's a poem.

Fri, February 12th, 2021 1:30am


Thank you, I think it's more of a poem too! :)

Thu, February 11th, 2021 6:45pm

Alizzia Ward

It was really nice though! Just confused between the song lyric and the poem.. Sorry! (To simplify: It is a song, or a poem?)

Fri, February 12th, 2021 7:52am


Either or, I don't know to be honest...

Fri, February 12th, 2021 4:36am

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