A sad movie

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Her mind slowly transitions as she starts thinking clearly

She still doesn’t understand it fully

 And she once allowed her thoughts to turn into bullies

And each time she executed poorly

There were times when she was calm and out of nowhere she got moody

It felt like her life was a sad movie

Where there was more sadness than beauty

What was once a goofy soul

Now turned into a gloomy soul

And now she wasn’t even feeling whole

And she feels nothing but alone

And she lacks self-control

And it creates nothing but damage

It was way too much baggage

Even breathing became a challenge

But her soul she had to examine

The savage thoughts had to vanish

Submitted: February 12, 2021

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That third line - so often that happens and then it's hard to turn things around again as you go on to illustrate.
Nice work with this.

Fri, February 12th, 2021 6:48pm


Thank you so much for your comment! :)

Sat, February 13th, 2021 8:05am

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