Sideshow Hearts

Book by: dharmadischarge

Reads: 41 | Likes: 0 | Shelves: 0 | Comments: 2

imagine if the Wizard of Oz was adapted by John Carpenter then Thomas Pynchon really dug it and novelized it. All constructive criticism is welcome.

Fantasy fantasy adventure nonsense

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Chapter 1

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G. Addams

It had some interesting points. I was concerned Zip was going to be buried alive. You were good on the description of the dead trees .

Tue, February 23rd, 2021 7:47pm

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Hi, thank you and I will review your story in the next few days.

Wed, February 24th, 2021 11:50pm

C.A.A.

The story line here kept me reading on. Some grammar mistakes but not enough to make it unreadable. Your words painted a very unique world - I'd love to hear more about Zip and where he ends up. My own imagination has him in different places after he eats. Some good, some not so good. Keep up the good work.

Thu, February 25th, 2021 2:59am

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Hi, thank you. I am self-educated, and I have always struggled with grammar but will continue to work on it but I Am glad you enjoyed it and I will be continuing this story.