I signed up to Booksie

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Okay so I've had a look around Booksie and now it's my turn to add something to the site. I hope you like this poem about my first impressions of the site.

I signed up to Booksie

and had a quick looksee

around this sociable site.

I was happy to see

that people like me

want to think and dream and write.

 

I read a kind heart,

Played her part

In bringing people together;

Double investigation

brought consternation

to a man at the end of his tether.

 

A poem's special feature,

one sea-dwelling creature,

shook hands in a how d'y' do?

And loving provision

of enhanced television

is described for me and for you.

 

And now it's for me

to set my pen free

and offer my work to this site.

I'll admit that I'm nervous,

but much more - I'm curious;

do you think that this poem is alright?

 


Submitted: February 20, 2021

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Fayren Meric

It definitely works. Welcome.

Sat, February 20th, 2021 5:23pm

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Thank you for your positive feedback and for your welcome. I'm beginning to find my feet.

Sun, February 21st, 2021 6:11am

88 fingers

This poem had a nice flow to it. Hope you like this site.

Sat, February 20th, 2021 5:47pm

Author
Reply

Thank you for you encouragement. Yes I'm beginning to get the feel of the site and to think that I might fit in!

Sun, February 21st, 2021 6:10am

D. Thurmond aka JEF

It's a fine bit of writing, not quite nail biting, but, hay, it works for the many. So keep up the good work, you may publish a book, and sell each one for a guinea.

Sat, February 20th, 2021 7:46pm

Author
Reply

Thank you for this light-hearted feedback.

Sun, February 21st, 2021 6:09am

Alizzia Ward

Nice poem! I also had the same feeling about posting my new poetry in this friendly site.

Sun, February 21st, 2021 6:24am

Author
Reply

Thanks for the positive feedback and for your empathy.

Sun, February 21st, 2021 6:08am

dreamcatcher10

I liked it! :)

Tue, February 23rd, 2021 11:25pm

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