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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Writing and Reviewing!

A poem, hope you enjoy! Sorry for not writing these past few days. Sometimes life just kind of gets in the way!

Summer blossoms blooming,

lying under the beehive,

watching honey drip.

Feet go up *flip*,

against the maplewood bark,

ready to relax.

But something's wrong,

reaching a climax.

Pinned against a concrete wall,

watching, waiting,

for the blow that will end it all.

You realize you're on the ground,

whimpering a sound.


One single word flows,

a flicker of hesitation,

can never last long,

without realization.




something to hold onto.

Stabbed through the heart,

ski mask falling down for one glimpse,

of who the thug was.


You asked,

but she kicks you down.

There's no more feeling relaxed.

"You always tried to be better than me,

but now,

I can be the one set free."

She says with a smirk,

her responsibilities,

she had been known to shirk.

Blood splatters,

one final glance, before the end...

Of you.

She has one thing to say,

"Poor little you. Stuck here, pleading all day."

And then that's it.

Knocked unconcious,

on the stone,

the final hit,

has been blown...

*The different fonts are supposed to show the poem reaching a climax*



Submitted: February 23, 2021

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I hope no one actually has this in their lives!
Sister relationships are very important.

Tue, February 23rd, 2021 7:46pm


Yeah... THAT would be terrible!

Tue, February 23rd, 2021 11:57am


I can't even amagine... :(

Tue, February 23rd, 2021 7:58pm



Tue, February 23rd, 2021 7:58pm

LE. Berry

Really like the changing of font to represent a sharp shifting of reality...unique.

Tue, February 23rd, 2021 7:59pm


Thanks, I thought it was a good thing, but wasn't sure!

Tue, February 23rd, 2021 12:23pm

Tara Roeske

I really like this poem. I like the way you used the font to show a dramatic change in tone. I also like the imagery and the tone of the attacking sister. You can really feel her animosity toward her sister.

Wed, February 24th, 2021 2:40am


Thank you, I do hope you enjoyed!

Wed, February 24th, 2021 5:36am

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