Can I?

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

can I?

 

 

 

Can I have you?

Can I eat food?

Can I act crude?

Can I be who I am?

Can I wham or slam?

Can I dwell in my land?

Can I express my feelings?

Can I not be depressed forever?

Can I get outta my room never?

Can I meet my doom forever?

Can I hang out with my friends whenever I want?

Can I know the thruth?

Can I make you a peaceful truce?

Can I travel my whole life?

Can I work as what I want?

Can I hope it's yes as all the answers I sought?

 

 

 


Submitted: March 10, 2021

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Ann Sepino

This is really nice! I love the touch of hopeful insecurity that the poem has. It's as if the speaker has an innocent and naughty side and is asking for permission to keep both. Thank you for sharing your work on the site. :)

Thu, March 11th, 2021 2:45am

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I'm so glad that you enjoyed and felt me!
:)

Sun, March 14th, 2021 12:33pm

Alizzia Ward

Oh.. teenagers in a nutshell?
Kidding, but you know that..
~Alizzia

Thu, March 11th, 2021 6:12am

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Ha ha,
yup! in a way at least...
-Ivy Zoucher-

Sun, March 14th, 2021 12:35pm

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